Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Have You Ever?

Have you ever felt confused in your place?
Weird for your school?
Scared of your classmates?
Misplaced, lost, lonely...
Do you feel out of place?
I have.
I do.
Everyday.
No matter where I am,
No matter what I'm doing,
I feel so out of place.

by Brianna Maio

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

This was actually pretty good. I liked it and how you used some repetition to get a point across. I feel that it is too brief though, to improve this you should add a little more background to your topic.

-Daniel P.-