The woman who's care is a deep lake
and tries to protect all
who is heaven and nirvana
who is the most modest of goddesses
who's intelligence and mind is an endless sea
who's eyes are a peaceful purity
and a fiery passion
is who I dared to face
to try and win over,
which was a good call, for she, who makes me feel like a king in her presence
and who I spoke to for endless hours,
smiled upon me, and gave me the chance for which I was underserving
and held me in her loving embrace
which is equal to that of God's blessing
Our love was of the most loyal and honest
the love that I dreampt of for so very long
the love that I neededis gone
for that woman,the goedess I love and care for
is with anotherwho's image now replaces mine
A fiend, who's care lies not with her
but with her image
and while her beauty is unsurpassed,that is no love of which I know
for the monster does not love, he lusts,
lusts after the angel who once touched my life,
changed it forever
For this demon does not see her in the spotlight where she truly shines
her kindness is her true quality that I adore
But perhaps one day she will see the devil for what he is
and take me back
so that I may return to that loving embrace
and the deep lake that is her care
and protects all who go in it
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This is a strong poem. You used repeatition to get some of the finer points across, which set them in the minds of readers. The ideas that were brought up in this poem were ones that don't get enough credit. Everyone has lost someone in their life, but you turn that into something beautiful. Don't let this poem be your last and you'll go far in life.
WoW this is awsome. You did a great job on this. the oniy thindg i can say is check for spelling.
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